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Zayne and Griff by JoaoRodrigoBaptista Zayne and Griff by JoaoRodrigoBaptista
Even though I'm some sort of a comic geek, I must admit I lost interest in most of the single issue comics that come out right now. They tend to be a bit boring, and most of the time they're always preparing for the major crossover event of that year, that will change everything in the publisher's universe, just like they did the previous year. Nowadays, I tend to buy more collected issues, paperbacks, omnibus(es?), etc. That way, I get an entire story arc in the same book. Considering how my place is, it's easier to find a whole story arc in a volume, instead of a lot of single issues, they seem to lose themselves all over the place.
Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic, from Dark Horse Comics, is an exception. It's fun and funny, the scripts are very well written and the art is, for the most part, ok. I was a fan of the Bioware game, and was a bit put off when I learned they weren't going to be focusing on the characters of the game. But they came up with Zayne Carrick, the failed padawan, and Griff, the coolest con artist in the Star Wars Universe, right after Han solo.
This is my depiction of them, hope you like it! It was also my first time drawing an alien, I think.
Hopefully, I'll be posting the color version within a week, so check back by then!
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I really like the depth of field in this image. You took the conscience effort to add leaves in the front and ships flying in the back and even trees. It really helps the image out. I like the style in which you drew this in as well and that you decided to take a black and white approach. I only have two suggestions. My first on being your use of lines. It is obvious that you used lines in the characters and there is nothing wrong with that, my only quarrel is the consistency of lines through out the image. In the moons, you used lines, but in the shape ships not. It looks a bit off....personally I think you should remove the lines from the moons, so that they not only look more like moons, but so that it would be more consistent. The other options is to add lines to the ships, the trees and the plants in the front (which I feel is extra work:-)) My second suggestion would be to fix the lighting on the two characters. Since there is a light saber (or what appears to be one), that is the strongest light source by there legs, but you show that it is coming from directly in front....I think that is just a small detail though.

Overall, it is a good image :-)
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It may just be the grey scale used here but this is pure nostalgia :) the characters are interesting and drawn well, attention being placed on their pose and outfits.

However I would say pay close attention the legs, the alien creature looks off balance, the leg that is straight needs to be placed more to the viewers left while the humans forward facing leg looks as though it should be slightly longer.

The shading on the face also looks out of place as it is not blended as well compared to the shading on the environment.
The detail of the leaves in both the background and the foreground are impressive and makes me wonder why the same detail wasn't applied to the moons and ships in the sky as they stand out too much and dampen the atmosphere of the image.

A brilliant picture and makes me think it's a shame there aren't more images like this :)
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Trotsky17 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
I love Zayne and the Gryff. It's a great pic!
dorkycats Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice drawing. :D I've always enjoyed playing KotOR 1 and reading the comics, which I added to the list of my favorite comics. :D
SpectorKnight Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009
Aw yeah. Best comic ever. Nice job! :D
crazy-bree Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009
cool drawing, I like the cheeky atmosphere of the image. the characters look kinda awkward with their legs. One too stiff the other off balance. also the laser thingo is a little too bright near his hand. other than that great job :)

ps. I love your signature on the piece :P
Makkeroe Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it, very nice.
But i don't like the legs of guy on left and i think that the lines of the starships on background must be more neat!
anjyil Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Very interesting picture. I like the facial expressions of both characters--they are very loose and natural. The saluting-guys outfit needs a couple of tweaks. Mainly the leggings that are stark-white clash with the rest of the outfit and make a kind of white rectangle at the bottom with the alien's white trousers. Maybe something a little more contrasting?
Reyrey33 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
its great i can imaginate it colored ^^ it would be gret
Lime-Street Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I think I might like this better if it were colored too, but other than that I think this is really amazing! : )

I love the detail of the background, and their clothes. It all really flows together nicely ^_^
KwongBee-Arts Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like the black and white quality of this great work very professional lookin
4u64ica Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good job with the figures but the background looks a bit plain. There's no depth in it.
sarirah Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009
The glowing effect you have has been done very well.

I like this in black and white. :)
greenxin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice drawn. i like the clothes, looks very realistic somehow.
AestheticJunk Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009
This is really good!:)
DarkEchelon Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work!:D I really like the their outfit designs.
Cklaighe Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
great expressions you have there...

may i suggest that you add lighting effects from the sword... how the light reflects in the other guy's clothing... :)
FireLilyAS Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice. i like the background work especially
Formlessforce Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009
This is great! I love the game KotoR, but I've never read the comics. Are they similar at all?
Arkky Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009
Cool! Their poses and expressions seem to tell a lot about them.
Azynia Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely drawn! I think a colored version would look nice too. :)
AglioPh0bia Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I think I would like this better if it were coloured. But I really think you did a great job on the clothing. I've never been able to draw that well.
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August 13, 2009
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